Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?

[domino.99]

I knew this would be the best place to come due to it being on the subjects of buses can i have your honest opinions on this please?
Ignore the white space at the right hand side :)

[P419 EJW]

The picture looks exactly the same as the fare guide sticker on the driver's cab door. Looks great. Sorry for not being critical, I'm a mathematics guy!

[Trident 4609]

That is pretty impressive Dom :) Looks very much like the real thing :)

[karl724223]

You forgot to add the following
You can pay half fare for your kids
You must pay correct fare not contribute to it
Take your rubbish with you

[domino.99]

You forgot to add the following
You can pay half fare for your kids
You must pay correct fare not contribute to it
Take your rubbish with you

Unfortunatly i didnt have enough room to fit it on

[domino.99]

oh yeah i've just look back over his comment haha

[nitromatt1]

You forgot to add the following
You can pay half fare for your kids
You must pay correct fare not contribute to it
Take your rubbish with you

Unfortunatly i didnt have enough room to fit it on

That was one of Karls stupid sarcastic comments that add nothing to this forum I guess?

Calm down, he was clearly joking lol

[Trident 4609]

Just saying the truth..... anyway back on topic ::).

As I said previously a very nice piece of work there Dom :) Certainly will get good marks :)

[Liberator9]

Great piece of work there; looks just like the ones they actually use!

[Liverpool Street]

Very similar work there, well done!

[Rob H]

Great Work Dom :)

[Sh4318]

It looks really good. The only thing I'd look at is spacing, quite a couple elements are really close together, which make the design look a bit cramped

[Steve6544]

cleverly set out like the pe e200s design for it
Well done dom

[CL]

Amazing piece! Congratulations, honestly, I wouldn't have to time or energy to create a masterpiece like this. My only criticism is the NX logo, but I'm not trying to be too picky! It's honestly extraordinary!

[domino.99]

Amazing piece! Congratulations, honestly, I wouldn't have to time or energy to create a masterpiece like this. My only criticism is the NX logo, but I'm not trying to be too picky! It's honestly extraordinary!

Cheers mate i couldn't use any existing images so i had to get as close to it as i could  :) :) :)