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Title: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: domino.99 on March 07, 2014, 06:49:47 PM
I knew this would be the best place to come due to it being on the subjects of buses can i have your honest opinions on this please?
Ignore the white space at the right hand side :)
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: P419 EJW on March 07, 2014, 07:21:22 PM
The picture looks exactly the same as the fare guide sticker on the driver's cab door. Looks great. Sorry for not being critical, I'm a mathematics guy!
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: Trident 4609 on March 07, 2014, 07:36:30 PM
That is pretty impressive Dom :) Looks very much like the real thing :)
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: karl724223 on March 07, 2014, 07:47:33 PM
You forgot to add the following
You can pay half fare for your kids
You must pay correct fare not contribute to it
Take your rubbish with you
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: domino.99 on March 07, 2014, 07:53:59 PM
Quote from: karl724223 on March 07, 2014, 07:47:33 PM
You forgot to add the following
You can pay half fare for your kids
You must pay correct fare not contribute to it
Take your rubbish with you
Unfortunatly i didnt have enough room to fit it on
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: domino.99 on March 07, 2014, 08:00:57 PM
oh yeah i've just look back over his comment haha
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: nitromatt1 on March 07, 2014, 08:03:43 PM
Quote from: Nathan on March 07, 2014, 07:56:19 PM
Quote from: NXDom on March 07, 2014, 07:53:59 PM
Quote from: karl724223 on March 07, 2014, 07:47:33 PM
You forgot to add the following
You can pay half fare for your kids
You must pay correct fare not contribute to it
Take your rubbish with you
Unfortunatly i didnt have enough room to fit it on

That was one of Karls stupid sarcastic comments that add nothing to this forum I guess?

Calm down, he was clearly joking lol
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: Trident 4609 on March 07, 2014, 08:08:20 PM
Just saying the truth..... anyway back on topic ::).

As I said previously a very nice piece of work there Dom :) Certainly will get good marks :)
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: Liberator9 on March 07, 2014, 09:02:29 PM
Great piece of work there; looks just like the ones they actually use!
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: Liverpool Street on March 07, 2014, 10:02:52 PM
Very similar work there, well done!
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: Rob H on March 07, 2014, 10:03:51 PM
Great Work Dom :)
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: Sh4318 on March 08, 2014, 01:02:01 AM
It looks really good. The only thing I'd look at is spacing, quite a couple elements are really close together, which make the design look a bit cramped
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: Steve6544 on May 07, 2014, 08:16:29 PM
cleverly set out like the pe e200s design for it
Well done dom
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: CL on May 07, 2014, 09:00:54 PM
Amazing piece! Congratulations, honestly, I wouldn't have to time or energy to create a masterpiece like this. My only criticism is the NX logo, but I'm not trying to be too picky! It's honestly extraordinary!
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: domino.99 on May 08, 2014, 04:24:45 PM
Quote from: clayderman on May 07, 2014, 09:00:54 PM
Amazing piece! Congratulations, honestly, I wouldn't have to time or energy to create a masterpiece like this. My only criticism is the NX logo, but I'm not trying to be too picky! It's honestly extraordinary!
Cheers mate i couldn't use any existing images so i had to get as close to it as i could  :) :) :)
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: CL on May 08, 2014, 05:23:38 PM
Quote from: NXDom on May 08, 2014, 04:24:45 PM
Quote from: clayderman on May 07, 2014, 09:00:54 PM
Amazing piece! Congratulations, honestly, I wouldn't have to time or energy to create a masterpiece like this. My only criticism is the NX logo, but I'm not trying to be too picky! It's honestly extraordinary!
Cheers mate i couldn't use any existing images so i had to get as close to it as i could  :) :) :)

There's a font you can use, it's called 'Abeatbykai' - Very similar, practically the same as Beats by Dr.Dre, I use it for my NXWM Bus nets: (You can hardly tell the difference!
http://www.fontspace.com/kaibuskirk/abeatbykai
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: Liverpool Street on May 10, 2014, 06:23:50 PM
Quote from: clayderman on May 08, 2014, 05:23:38 PM
Quote from: NXDom on May 08, 2014, 04:24:45 PM
Quote from: clayderman on May 07, 2014, 09:00:54 PM
Amazing piece! Congratulations, honestly, I wouldn't have to time or energy to create a masterpiece like this. My only criticism is the NX logo, but I'm not trying to be too picky! It's honestly extraordinary!
Cheers mate i couldn't use any existing images so i had to get as close to it as i could  :) :) :)

There's a font you can use, it's called 'Abeatbykai' - Very similar, practically the same as Beats by Dr.Dre, I use it for my NXWM Bus nets: (You can hardly tell the difference!
http://www.fontspace.com/kaibuskirk/abeatbykai

Mmm.. some of the letters are correct, others not so. If you are using Paint.NET or whatever, just get rid of the "flick" at the end of each letter, noticeably most on the letter "r"
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: domino.99 on May 28, 2014, 10:42:56 AM
Thank you all so much for your help on the first part.

Can i have the same kind of feedback on this please. One this piece I was allowed to use 2 images off of the internet.
Title: Re: Can i have your honest opinions on the part of my graphics coursework please?
Post by: CL on May 28, 2014, 12:54:24 PM
Very nice! I haven't actually been the the 222, ever and don't know what it looks like, this looks amazing! Keep up the good work. :)